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In a message dated 1/26/2004 10:18:36 AM Central Standard Time,
SandraDodd@... writes:

> The next year I took
> his class again, and if I got a paper back with few to no red marks I was
> truly
> disappointed. I LOVED his feedback, and his "look, this comma is
> unnecessary, and it would sound more like you if you went straight to the
> verb and
> emphasized that."

I have a good friend, another hsing Mom who in her other life was a high
school English teacher. I call her my personal English teacher, LOL. I love being
able to send her sentences that aren't working for me and asking her to tell
me what I am doing wrong.
Still learning,
Laura Buoni

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